5/5 stars on yelp. 

Both verses whas creative,just some common raps second verse whas kinda a comeback for the win verse,with some combos lil puns fair vote good text battle

really bad battle and an easy win for an opponent with more skill and experience. dissapointing. BSA

strange one but fv

I shoUldve sniped this when I had the chance.  

MyRhymesAreBad: At least your name isn’t ironic. There is nothing positive I can say about your verse. Firstly, have multi’s, and capitalize your rhymes. Multis are multi word rhymes, for example: Moms spaghetti/ Arms are heavy. Secondly, have actual punchlines. Good punchlines have a set up, and the diss at the end. The diss at the end should always be a multi. Third, it says 8 lines, and by 8 lines, it means write 8 lines, not 8 half-lines. Fourth, include wordplay (twisting the meaning of words) and include metaphors (Comparing two things without using “like”) or similes (Same but using like.). Fifth, do research on the top battlers to observe how they win. Sixth, include personal disses to the opponent (I would advise don’t drop open) as they will hit 500x harder than any non-personal diss.

- Needs Multis

- Only capitalize rhymes

- Needs proper punchlines and disses

- Needs metaphors,similes,wordplay

- Don’t drop open, higher chance of losing than if writing a personal

- Should do research on: Rieper (Multi’s), Shodan (punchlines), BURDENS (creativity) and other good battlers on the site.

Korvus: Never before have I ever been disappointed by one of your verses this much. However, it’s  understandable as you got done what you had to get done. Firstly, fill in the box. Secondly, your punchlines didn’t have any personals, and your one metaphor needed an expo.

+ Good multis

+ Decent concepts

+ Had to do what he had to do

- Fill the fucking box

- Needs personals to hit hard.

just wasn't too much for me but ok for small fries not hating either just saying lets put in real work

Korvus 

My father would drink, he would womanize. He'd make outrageous claims like he invented the question mark. Sometimes, he'd accuse chestnuts of being lazy.