Racketeer won this battle for me because he had a conceptually-themed bar full of relatively clean multies and some nice boxing wordplay I really liked. ShereKhan's verse was solid enough but the multies were quite minimal and the wordplay was sparse so I didn't think it stacked up to Racketeer's here.

Racketeer I thought your Mayweather bar was maybe botb although the concept is a little played it was still carried out quite well, especially given that it's May. Your closer was also very solid. However, your multies had a couple of issues which held back their execution. Although they were typically quite phonetically clean, the stressing sometimes made them a bit awkward. For instance, "can't jump my rhymes, cunt/and the guy dies one/have ya mic tie, son" ones. In the second two, the stressing clearly leaves the second syllable unstressed, but its quite weird to unstress jump in the first set. It worked, it was just a bit unnatural. Just something to be aware of, it took away from your flow.

ShereKhan many of your multies were just a bunch of words with the same suffix. The first 5 multies were all like this, and while they do rhyme perfectly this is obviously because they're just the same thing with a different prefix. Try to make sure your rhymes are more like the ones later in your verse, which were of etymologically unrelated words forming rhymes which is far more complex, impressive and effective. Also try to have longer multies, a maximum of three doesn't really hit too hard.

Good battle!

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Auto-win to Racketeer for obvious reasons.

very close battle SK had some good word plays but i liked R multys better and the boxing approach

One had better rhyme patterns and schemes here. Other did alright and definitely has potential. Fairs in fellas

Close battle.  I felt both lacked complexity and I really wasn't feeling the slanted multis of one and the simple multis of the other. That said,  the battle was enjoyable and extremely close. I gave it to my winner based solely on complexity of his multis though I felt his structure was too slanted.  

Wasnt a bad battle, ima go with sherekhan, his verse was overall better...cleaner punches..a more consistent rhyme scheme in the flow...rocketeer u had a good flow...it wasnt bad...i felt the may weather line was a bit of a reach and jus felt like your verse jus didnt hit hard enough...not bad tho