Rieper was clearly ahead here on multies, concepts, punches, wordplay and flow. Mystix your verse wasn't terrible or anything you just took on far too excellent of an opponent.

Rieper there probably isn't a great deal of constructive criticism I can give you. One thing is that there were a bunch of references to things that I eventually could work out what they were (Sierra Mist, Frontline) but in my country and presumably several other voters', we don't have those things. If you're going to make flips with things that might be ubiquitous in your country but not elsewhere, briefly saying what they are in an expo would be much appreciated. I was also unclear on what exactly "C Era" was and why it was synonymous with Culture.

Mystix my biggest advice to you would be to CAPITALISE your multies like so in order to make them easier to read and see. It would also be worth taking just a bit more time to work on your multies to make them more complex, I think your longest here was about three syllables whereas that should ideally be your shortest multi.

Kellz as in R Kelly

I had Rieper winning with a verse that was more structured and heavier overall. The first two bars were clever but still a little bit unnatural, especially in that the second one relied on calling your opponent "Tix" which isn't an immediately obvious nickname for him. The stethoscope concept has been used about 10000000 times, but the closer was a clever little spin. Mystix had some aggression and rhyming, but he wasn't able to keep up with Rieper's focused assaults. I'd recommend taking some clues from how Riep wrote his verse here. Fair's in.

No real expo needed clear winner here Mystix not sure what you were going for but it didn't work I suggest you study the more experienced battlers on this site and take notes hopefully it will help you to understand what it takes to secure a win. Lock stop playing w/the chiren Respect to both fairs in 

rieper was much more complex n harder punches n structure .the opponent only completed 97 percent of da box, needs to add more multis on his. fair vote no h8 .

Wowzers. My winner had the haymakers 

KILLERS.

The Winners concepts, multis, punches and execution was top notch along with excellent wp. Loser here was decent just wish he could have incorporated Multis to convey his concepts more. The fair is in

Alright so it would be unfair to vote on this since me and mystix have a personal going on, but I’ll drop a quick review. Rieper wins this as he has multi’s and everything isn’t semi (or even fucking less) rhymes.

Personally, gun bars dont impress me, I felt one had better punches than the other.

fair is tossed

winner did his thing loser was ok no hate 

Mys, though outclassed here,  def has skills and should look to develop his game more.  This was a blowout,  but the experience gap was great and, like I said,  the loser should keep grinding