I have Bnas the win here mostly because Trillstatus didn't fill the box.

Bnas: Your first bar didn't really have anything to do with the battle, it seemed like a cypher opener tbh. However, your next three bars did actually set about attacking which was enough to get you the win here. Your multies were basic but generally clean; however often they seemed really unnecessary. For instance, the "dreadlocks" one didn't seem to have anything to do with the rest of its bar and was just an excuse for gratuitous rhyming. Try to make sure what you write is actually connected with itself, otherwise gratuitous and unrelated rhyming can be distracting from your punch.

Trillstatus: You weren't bad here. You had some multies which were decent, but to make them more effective try to CAPITALISE them like Bnas did here so that they're more obvious to readers. Also, try to make sure you fill up the whole box – don't use any line breaks or type enter at all, just write solidly (like Bnas's verse here) until the counter above the box tell's you you've written 8 (or 16 or whatever). In this battle you were behind on quality, but not by a large amount so it was really your quantity which let you down.

MvH

One has to fill up the entire space. Also use multi syllable rhyming, with better set ups and delivery. Fairs in fellas.