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The Wright brothers invented the airplanes.

Rest is pretty simple and self explainatory i guess.

Thanks for the opprtunity Racket & all the very best mate ! :)

PUNISH shit

oh esp for those unaware millenials, The Truman Show is about Jim Carrey who plays Mr. Truman and his whole daily life is being filmed as a series without only his knowledge.

yo i totally messed on this verse, nickle u got this one. 

i went hard thinking it was a blind and didn't wanna risk underestimating you lol 

always a pleasure battling you tho bro!

Its a painful & torturous time for dis MC when I POUND THIS COWARD for a THOUSAND HOURS, as I turn to a deadly beast until this FOWL JERKs' IS MERKED thats OUT DEVOURED

This is straight up all filler. No punchline here or set up really. First multis are cool but again they don't get built upon going forward. After reading this you haven't really made any ground in the verse.

& now you become hippy beggin for peace but Ill turn your FLOWER POWER into FLOURED POWDER.

This had potential as a punch but I just don't see it in the way you executed it. I have no idea what turning his flower power into floured powder is even supposed to mean.

Now u want to use gun bars but I CLONED YOUR CHROME SETS, that looks similar to your OWN FOUR CHRONE SETS,

Again, get what you're going for here but the wording really lets you down.

but i took em away from u too dat Ill hide in paper bags so I WONT FOLD THOSE YET, and I tied ya friend up & made him drown in da sea now this BROKE FOLK GOES NEXT, so you 'hope for a rescue to happen, like heroic scuba divers on ur way " but DONT HOLD YOUR BREATH

This was your best line of the verse and a decent punch. I think you used a bit too much space in building to the punch itself but a decent hit here. The multis could have been cleaner though.

Next, Nick

this BLOKE'S SMOTHERED coz these writes(Wrights)all about the fly stuff like THOSE BROTHERS/

Not a bad concept but I mean can you really call your bars "writes"? Just doesn't make sense grammatically. 

you ain't DOPE FUCKER you lack a symbol(cymbal)of mettle(metal) like a BROKE DRUMMER/

I'm just not sure what symbol of mettle is supposed to realy mean, though the double meaning here is creative I suppose.

only way you get votes is coz you so pussy you could ATTRACT A MAN/you couldn't scale up ur skills even if you suited up as AQUAMAN/

Had potential but I think the execution was a bit off but still a fresh concept.

you wouldn't have mic presence(presents)even if somebody GIFTED YOU ONE/this wannabe TWISTED HUMAN'S whole life is fake like he MISTER TRUMAN

These multis are all kinds of ugly. The key with multis is that they cant just line up syllabically when you break them down syl by syl, but instead need to sound the same when read aloud. GIFTED YOU ONE and TWISTED HUMAN is a great example of something that sounds ok when you break it down by each syllable but when you read it in the sentence it sounds awful. also mic presence/presents is like THE most played concept in rap period.

/imma squash racket here(racketeer)like a sports game this bloke's the WEAKEST DUDE/his flows drained and even his crew's the same coz Bazooka Slayers again is just BS(bullshit)TOO/

I'M A SQUASH RACKET HERE. I dunno, doesn't make much sense to me. Key with wordplays is they gotta make grammaticall sense both ways. Not a bad overall concept though and good creativity.

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Overall, Nick was much more creative while keeping his writing a bit cleaner and just making more sense with his execution, so gets my vote.

Man that was hella vote bro!! really appreciate it man!! 

thats ugly multi bit is pretty much new found knowledge honestly, will try to implement it.

the mettle symbol was to signify the metal cymbals which drums have basically the bug metal golden dish kinda things there in my profile pic too.

thanks again for the vote man!! respects!!

Rack u really slipped on this one cos i def seen harder drops from u but nickle was just too punch heavy and came with some fresh concepts so the fair is in. Dope read

"POUND THIS COWARD for a THOUSAND HOURS" pause b

PUNISH shit

nice battle

PUN ISH

Both had lots of filler and shit that had nothing to do with the final punch. Need to work on stripping that shit out and making it relevant. nickles came with better concepts and less forced multis 

Loser was all over the place in this one. Opener was okay but too basic, had a broken multi in too. The flower bit was weak too. Most of your punches weren't developed enough, its like you focused more on the multis rather than executing your concepts creatively. Closer wasn't bad and was defos your best line in this verse, but you took way too long setting that punch up which made it lose a lotta sting. It's an 8 line verse and if you spend half of it setting 1 punch up it's not gonna go well. Multi work did improve though and also the wording was not too choppy and unnatural. 

Winner's opening bars were nice but could have had cleaner wording. First so didn't work really well both ways and made it unnatural but I liked the second punch. Your punches were set up better than the loser's but your wording was problematic. Shit like the racket here flip didn't really make sense. Good punches and better use of your concepts but you gotta work on cleaning up your wording.

PUNISH SHIT

nickels crushed Racketeeer that wrights line was a crucial intro and he hit ya with that Aquaman line,mic presents line and devour you at the end lol 

The wright brothers did not create the airplane,Richard Pearse from New Zeland did

Mystix, there was a dude in India as well who invented one before the wright brothers just like pearse but documentations do not suggest a succesfuly take off and landing which is why only the wright brothers are credited with the invention. 

Dude's name was Shivkar Bapuji