The first verse to me did not rhyme and had no multis creativity in set ups or multis. I would encourage looking at other battles to get a structure idea on how to fill the box. and work set ups and capping multis. I'd also work on more heavier punches then this, this to me came off as a cypher and didnt do much to help you secure a win.

Man, I do advise the same thing inregards to capping rhymes and identifying setups and how to structure a verse. Though you edged the win here, but id like to see you hone your skills this is a basic verse but you can write one now you just need to work on being more  creativy with set ups and making punches harder. Keep it up

Fairs in no hate GB

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both had no rhymes or end rhymes or capped multis which made their reads inconvenient and pretty difficults to decipher the beginning and end of their bars along with understanding are they really even raps or just paragraphs.

bob was all out on a self hype imagery high and talking gangs n stuff while the diss components in his verse was pretty non existent.

manfree even tho you had the flips and an upperhand you pretty much committed suicide by having no end rhymes at the end of most of your lines. Also, your grammar is off in a few places take care of that.

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Manfree's flips

Since there were no rhymes to begin with in the first place, Manfree gets this for actly dissing his opponent.

Read on a few battle and work on giving your verses a more readable structure next time guys.

Rhyming Bob wit Bob really helped me descide my winner. And the the fact that there was not a single punch.. Get some structure n multies going. N don't forget this is LETS BEEF... not LETS TALK ABOUT HOW GANGSTER WE ARE Hmu if anything fair vote

one  was more of a cypher, fairs in

FIRE

good battle, edging it to Manfree cus his verse stung a lil bit more complex kind of depth, both did their thing though

Loser didnt fill the box and also was a lot more cypherish. You gotta direct shit towards your opponent. I'd say read more battles and also the votes on the battles to see how others write and what voters expect. E.g. I expect clean wording and good execution of your punches, which are based on fresh concepts.

Winner did enough to take this, too basic though. Gotta work on using concepts to make a more creative bar. Think of it as dissing yourself, if someone had said that to you would you actually be offended? Good drop though, keep at it bro

nursey rhyme battle ya'll both can be better i'll slaughter you both 1 on 2 easy