Expo: A quip is a witty remark, or joke. Alter Bridge is a alternative metal band, who have a song called Ties That Bind. Ties That Bind is also a shared belief or factor that brings people together. Faltering is a pause to think, or a mistake. Fiche identifies three distinct stages in the development of faith: 1. Doubt, 2. Knowledge, 3. Faith, making the Ties That Bind a mini-scheme on religion. Aberration is the failure of rays to converge at one focus because of limitations or defects in a lens or mirror. In this case, I'm saying he has very little vocus and is held back due to his limited outlook. Shere Khan is the tiger from The Jungle Book. A Tigress is a female tiger. Titus was a Roman emperor. Charmin is "ultra-soft." Laryngitis is an inflammation of the voice box from overuse, irritation, or infection, and the play here is that he is giving me mental laryngitis, that is, irritating my brain from overuse trying to make sense of his bars. Gigivitis is a gum diesease. In The Jungle Book, one of Shere Khan's greatest weaknesses is his fear of fire, which Mowgli uses against him.

Good luck, ShereKhan. May the best man win.

the battle go hard and it was good on bothe side, but Heavy as the name his verses were so heavy too. thnxx for this guys 

Positives - 

ShereKhan - Multis, the heavy metal reference was decent, i like the way you conceptualize ur lines and keep it related to the current flow of things happening in the present bit like the casper reference even tho it did not work it sure is a good habit which will help you greatly as you keep growing in skills

HMH - Personals, Vocabulary, Punchlines, scared of fire and the alter bridge reference. This is certainly the best verse from you yet.

Negatives - 

ShereKhan - Self Hype oriented bars outnumbering the diss ones, the heavy metal reference was used well but was more of a flex than a diss, imagery was all over the place and the Facebook puns were not working coz of bad framing.The casper reference as well.

HMH - the bronchitis virus multi was out of place, the medical condition lines were a little overdone and forced and not really framed well enough to hit well, the titus bit was a low point in your verse too.

Overall - 

Multis - Sherekhan

(only coz HMH faltered with his in the titus line)

Vocab - Heavy Metal Hero

Punchlines - Heavy Metal Hero

(Sherekhan was going overboard with self hype and generic imagery slangs for disses which did not work)

Wordplays - Heavy Metal Hero

Personals - Heavy Metal Hero

Fairs in bro. HMH gets this IMO by a small margin which he earned thru the personal punchline at the end else it was pretty evenly matches coz both had the same lows and highs too.

Loser had issues with his wording, quite a lot of your setups were worded badly and this made your punches lose sting. Too much filler at points imo too, gotta focus more on the concepts and execute them better that you did here. I felt some of your lines were too basic like the opener about Casper. Lines like that have to have a fresher flip since they're so played. Closer was kinda self hype in a homo way Lol, you gotta keep your punches directed towards the other guy haha.

Winner had a clean opener but it wasn't too creative, you could have done more with it. Side note: your expos are way too long for starters, if you gotta explain the shit so much, then you know you haven't executed that bar properly. Some of your multis were stretched or slants which you should work on. You had the better concepts here and also the more impactful punches which gets you my vote.

I understand where your coming from sherekhan. When I first started on here I didn’t agree with the voting system. I felt they favored certain people/ setups/ delivery and everybody else were voted negatively toward. This is my first month back in 5 years. I’m still shaking the rust off. If your ever having troubling rhyming bigger words for better concepts rhymezone.com is a great tool. I’ve always found though the best disses are ones that aren’t too stretched, come to you naturally and there’s no need for a dictionary. But people also vote according to vocabulary and the amount of times you can rhyme, so it doesn’t hurt. My only advice is too always be flexing or attacking in your 8 lines. Never say anything to put your self down, “since I lost my last one to Casper”. I understand what you were trying to do there, but I would leave it out because it’s unnecessary and the main focus should be heavy metal. And maybe use a little bit either more complex words to rhyme with and if not more “lol” punches because unless it’s one of the other, the verse is not really going to stand out as much. Heavy metal won imo only cause he used a more direct approach with more complex vocab/delivery. I usually don’t leave long expos but you asked.

P.S. - audio battles on this site are my lucrative, and less critical of the ways they vote on the battles.

ok battle but Heavy went hard metal on this one and destroyed Khan.