i shouldve said "this guy burns Fam" instead of violent slam, cuz that dosent rhyme exactly w my pun. too late now.

gb n gl 

your expo bro im a girl and you call me a guy just a heads uo chek my name its MIZZ AMMO lol no h8 gl and gb

The fair is in, Lose here had a lot of multi sets but their connectivity was way off and punches were not all that great

Winner here did not have the best of punches either but delivered some funny lines which kind of won me over. so the fair is in.

On Racketeers game plan i liked the references you made, because some were relevant to today and some were just a nice call to nostalgia, yet many didn't click nor integrate well into each other and it felt just to busy on putting out some names for their sake. I really liked the - minerals to element into the iron man line while also calling the MCU - that could use some more though, due to the weird onyx line. Idk, didn't flow into the next word at all. On the game thing, i couldn't also like play with the idea of a planned action game, because by definition it's more about reaction and stuff. Also no! If you are the rpg you can't shoot, that would be shooting yourself or busting a nut, so idk where you were going with that.On Mizz Ammo side i liked the opener cracking on the not so well executed rpg end of the tail, so she knew where he went off the trail. But the hell this weird mood switch between being catty and sharp to then going on this CP line festival. It just had this odd mood to it, yet the flow was there to be read out of and then it also had some funny lines, still it got inconsistent at the end with any rhyming  proving the point of Racketeer.In the end I think Mizz has Racketeer out done by a small margin, proving a similarity of content they brought out. Can't wait to see more constructive battles between those two cats

Onyx bar was okay (Pokemon and Onyx rap group reference in one is what I interpreted), Avengers Iron Man bar I didn't like that, memory chip resume cool, ending line was also nice but i felt it couldve ended harder.

also formatting could use work, like /'s in between new bars or lines

Mizz Ammo came with her disrespectful style, some of it a bit 2010 GrindTime-esque, could've been more complex with the bars and punchlines

edging it Rack no hate

U cant strategize in rap like this a action video game cuz u SUCK DUDE, IN YA RHYMIN PLANS, I'll be like a superhero who uses minerals as weapons datll 'onyx' this DUMB NEWB...ITS A VIOLENT 'SLAM', u may hit me w/ 'anotha element' but ill turn 'avenger & dis ur 'end game' when I PUNCH YOU WITH DAT IRON, MAN.

good multis, the first two lines suffered bad set ups and the third one was decent punch with a faded effect due to lack of better wording 2/5

Next level on my memory chip I'll resume to SOCK THIS HOE! LEVEL SAVED,think dis mc rap battles like successful 1st person shooters? dats NOT HIS ROLE EVER PLAYED, so if ya "rpg is role playing game" than my character's 'rpg' is like COD: Modern Warfare" when im shootin you w/ a ROCKET PROPELLED GRENADE.(or shoot u w/ bazookas)

good multis again but no punch here really bro. 1.5/5

Total 3.5/10 (35%)

stop playin with us now -"YA ROCKET"- truth is out you -"CANT STOP IT"- your marvin gaye in "THA CLOSET" its -PLAYTIME- and by the way i heard that thru "THE GRAPEVINE"

decent multis, marvin gaye wasn't gay so that dnt add much to the intended punch infact nullifies it so 1.5/5

Believe this cat got "CLAWS" at the end of "MA PAWS" play me in "THA BOX" and ahm "RIPPIN YA JAWS" i get bookies looking sidewards way im "FLIPPIN THA ODDS"

decent multis,wordplay and imagery best bar of the battle 2.5/5

and if this faggots "SLACKING OFF"watching kiddy porn "JACKING OFF"time to sleep minus a Phalis cause im "HACK THE COCK" you know their just a PATH YOU DONT CROSS pedophile faggot what ever "YOUR FUCKIN" cause R Kelly pee is like chardonnay compared to your little "LOVE RING"

decent multis, the punch was not working at all for me tho 1.5/5

Total - 5.5/15 (36.66%)

a 0.1666% difference thats how close this battle was.

Overall -

Multis - Racketeer

Vocabulary - Tie

Punchlines - None

Wordplays - Tie

Metaphors - Mizz Ammo

Racketeer had better stretched multis, set ups were reaching tho which effected the punch like the iron man bit, while mizz ammo had simpler multis but a smoother readable verse with the same issues but one decent punchline which was more of a self hype than a diss, my advice would be to work on your imagery and explore more non sex related disses and for racketeer it would be not to broode over a single themese like the video game bit here so much that it seems reaching to the extent that the punch concept seems faded too, plu wtf! ur way better than this man!

Anyways, even tho this was more or less virtually a draw for me fairs in since tis mandatory to nitpick a winner, ammo gets this one by a scary small margin imo.

Honestly one took this with a bar the fair is in fellas

VP RUINS THIS WESITE TBH WERE ALL ENTITLED TO AN OPINION NOT 4 NO H8 BRO DOPE BARS 

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