obvious Joan was more smart w the raps sad boi kinda emotional no real hard punches. fv no h8

this was one sided joan came fluent throughout with harder punches imo

fairs in gl

Joan had some good punches here, some didnt hit to hard but others made a nice impact to the opp.

Thou sad had some punches in there, he didnt use multis and IMO he lacked flow here...

No H8, FV in

sadboi was just a bit too hard to follow with his ideas and rhyming. Felt like the shit was a bit basic and some of the content was hella pauseworthy too esp the closer. Joan was smoother top to bottom with more creative ideas that took this.

Not much here. Both could improve but my winner had a slight advantage fv

The ending took it for me I liked the setup and delivery plus the metaphors there. Sad pi was good too, lots of potential. Reminds me of the angry raps I first started writing when I was on here years ago. I think if you work on the setups, delivery and creativity a bit more you can do a lot of good work.

One had better wordplay punches and multis here. Other was alright but was nothing special. Fairs in dudes