Haaha good raps good luck & good battle

good shit guys

One had the better bars here no doubt. Fairs In fellas keep at it

Good battle

Jay: Despite your horrible showings before, this is possibly your worst yet. You still don’t have any multi’s, you still don’t have proper punctuation, you still have mostly ranting and self-promo lines and to make it even worse now you can’t even spell. I’m honestly so tired of you not listening to anyone’s advice. Casper and Bobby, got it. You, still didn’t. I can’t give you even a 2 on vocabulary since you used mostly slang and even spelt common words wrong. Since everything I said in the past 20+ battle s I’ve rated from you still applies, I’ll just point out every spelling mistake, since they’re the only thing that’s new. - Potato not Patatoe. -Rubik’s cube not Erubics. And if your talking about the Egyptian sun god, it’s Ra.

Korvus: Good showing. Not a single broken multi.

Korvus: You also had some good vocabulary and Metaphors too. However I would ditch the “Hit ‘em up” style disses as they are generally disliked compared to the Eminem style disses on this site. Not many battles don’t have much to criticize, and your skill certainly didn’t.

Jay:

- No multis

- No metaphors

- No punchlines

-No wordplay

- Multiple spelling mistakes

- Bad formatting.

Korvus:

+ Excellent Multis

+ Good metaphors

+ Good vocab

+ Decemt wordplay

- Punchlines not creative enough.

Jay : you're rapping but aint really attacking your opponent.  You need to start incorporating metaphors, wp, and punches to be a force here. For d amount of battles u put out u should have this figured out by now. keep elevating

Korvus : Stuck to a flow and scheme with decent multis and delivered ok punches enough to take the W

My choice had the better schemes