Expos -

1. folks generally accept jay's for easy wins to sort out their rankings here, no hate just the facts

2. saiyan made a i will finish anyone thread and never completed the battles he intended to do to get this place active

3. simple

4. simple - dry fruits have no water in em so the no flow reference

5. simple

6. niggas love chicken rest is simple

7. My name is Nick, John Stark and Willis Reed played for the Knicks & Willis was the MVP for the 1972 season when they won.

All the best Manfree the Senior, nice battling you!

PUNISH shit !

man it was soso hard to follow. i was confusedf. nickel nice punches deep setups

one was more creative n complex, dissed his opponent well thru

Holey this battle whas clos the first verse was a stream of some re runs,dubbs,the second verse whas more styker & hyper unique and I like that my emcees name was mentioned,good battle,fair vote;

Good Shit

Manfree: Firstly I suggest you read up on people who have been on the site a long time, such as Rieper or Shodan. Secondly, format your shit properly. Your missing a lot of periods in your sentance, and have periods where there should be commas. Thirdly, you need to have multi’s (multi word rhymes), and you also need to capitalize them too. Anyone can go on rhymezone and make a verse just using one word rhymes, not many can take together 3-5 word multis and have the verse make sense. Fourth, you need to make sure you have punches instead of just self promo. This means directly dissing your opponent for things such as previous battles, profile pic or username.

- Bad formatting

- No multis

- Punchliness were weak

- No metaphors or wordplay

Nick: Decent verse. Firstly, you had a few broken multi’s (grim wasn’t one more syllable than twin, I’d advise instead of using N, replace it with a comma.). Secondly, your punches were a bit weak. I’d advise using more wordplay and metaphors, and also attacking the opponent directly. Good showing.

+ Solid Multis

+ Good concepts

- Needs more direct attacks

- Replace N with comma

- Punches were a tad weak

Very hard to read Flow senior if you work on that its gonna be fine

Culture thanks for the feedback man, that n with a comma bit esp!

Obvious win here. More personals, and Manfree's verse was just subpar

Neither wowed but nick was more consistent and thorough. Losers verse was incoherent babble and arguably didn’t rhyme anywhere really.