Nice bars Kold. The 5 fingers of death line was dope. Good battle fam

Thanks fam. and GL with the battle

Savage bangs verse whas too strong and whas too much,for other emcee he didn't have any ammo too comeback wasn't`t enough o turn a victory,7-3,savage bangs,GOOD BATTLE

Thanks kold GL to you as well... Its dope to see veterns still out there.. 

Savage: Decent verse. Firstly, have multi’s. For someone ranked so highly, I would expect you to remember this. Multis save verses from being too basic. Your lack of multi’s will most likely cost you the battle. Secondly, make the bars directly against the opponent. Diss something about their past, something they did, their name or their profile picture. You can also go for generalised disses but make sure you go about it in a creative manner, such as metaphors or wordplay. Thirdly, tinfoil isn’t soft, it’s literally a metal. Decent verse, but lack of multi’s will cost you the battle.

Kold: Pretty good verse. Firstly, this might sound confusing, but only the word “fire” is a word which “ire” counts as an additional syllable. For example, fire is a special word, as it can be used as one or two syllables, fire or fi-re. So either way you used it, it’s wrong, as it would either break the first or second multi. If you go with fire with one syllable, you have to stick with one syllable. Other than that, damn good verse. You could also use an expo as some won’t get some of your wordplay or metaphors.

Savage

+ Decent Punches

+ Decent attempts at Metaphors

- No multis

- No disses directly aimed at opponent.

Kold:

+ Excellent Multi’s.

+ Great disses

+ Good metaphors and wordplay.

- One broken multi

- No expo for some confusing wordplay

EXPO - 'Not Aware Wolf'/Not A Were wolf'

Kold Buck-it = Cold Bucket, 

Sway In the Mourning/Sway n they mourning and also Five fingers of death is a show on Sway where rappers arre given beats to freestyle to.

Shotti and 6'9 are tre way members which most should know.

my winner stands true to his name... He has the coldest rhymes that causes crimes... word play is really great my G...savage was good..felt like only a hard sounding rhymes with lack of Skill in writing compared to my winner.. fairs in boys... Good Battle!!!