Classic battle. Both went really hard. I liked the angle talking from ChristLover. Jay had a lot of hidden bars, wordplay n the like. One criticism I'd have about this classic is that the multis would make it sound cooler. Still both brought it, big ups to both.

Christ: Again, same criticisms for you as your other battles. Firstly, you don’t have any multi’s. Secondly, your disses are directed at your opponent, but don’t hit him. Use wordplay or metaphors. Thirdly, don’t call him a false believer as a diss, seriously won’t get you anywhere bro. And if you are, do something creative with it instead of just calling it. Make a line about how he’s the new version of Judas if your going to make it about Christianity. Fourthly, you need better concepts. You can go far with a verse about religion, but you really can’t go that far with it. I salute you for the creativity, but you faltered hard with your execution. 

Jay: I feel like I just keep reiterating everything I say to you, and it just doesn’t go through your head. Firstly, have multi’s. Solid multi’s will save a bad verse from failing, they will seriously have a positive effect on you. Second, use proper punctuation. It’s very hard to read a verse with no periods. Third, ditch the self hype lines, save them for cyphers. Fourth, make sure your punches actually hit the opponent, your punches aren’t “hitting”.

Christ wins this by the smalles margin, just because his verse was better formatted and his punches were aimed for his opponent. 

Fair vote, all criticisms are made to help people improve to their highest ability.

This isnt bad. My loser just ended up cyphering off and lost punches mid way, as to my winner kept it together and help up to the end. Would love to see improvement out of both of you. Fairs in Gbs no hate

fv

on this one Christ is good