Also a classic battle, although I liked the other round more. Still both went hard. Gonna edge it to Jay for the cross lines he had.

Christ: Firstly, you need multi’s, as stated before, so I won’t  go in depth as to why. Secondly, you need to actually have disses, most of your rap was just rhyming. Matter of fact, last line was a hype line for your opponent, as meeting Jesus is a good thing. Not much to say here, as he criticisms to your other verses apply here too.

Jay: Firstly, format everything better. You need periods. Secondly,  you need multi’s. Third, cross out all the self hype lines and make sure your disses go for the opponent. Same thing I’ve said as before.

Christ:

+ Had periods

- No disses

- No multis

- No Wordplay or metaphors

- Last line hyped opponent.

Jay:

+ Some lines directly aimed at opponent.

+ Attempt at metaphors

- No multis

- No periods

- Mostly just self hype lines.

Im gonna suck at this I dont need to demoralize a person and make him feel bad deep down inside and curse at him. Proverbs 18:21 The tongue has the power of life and death, and those who love it will eat its fruit.

Christ you had it going there for a second then ended up cyphering off which lost the edge you had. Jay you had more punches than my loswer even tho you eneded up cyphering as well. Fairs in no hate GB