Caspertheone used good raps too streams his raps dissing his opponent and made him look silly in his rap verse,he had a good rap scheme ftw in this battle

I felt this was a one sided match imo casper was better overall in every aspect of the battle. He held it down enough just to cop the win fair vote.

Casper got this one no doubt straight bodies his opp IMO, but the loser wasnt terrible just didnt have as clean post like his opp... 

No Hi, FV in

777'S opener was fire.... but dropped of a lil, Casper was solid with the punches start to finish and a loved the flow. gb guys gl

The winner edged it with better hitters

ChristLober777 had some very interesting vocabulary in his verse and overall well thought out content. He has extreme amounts of potential and you just cannot deny it. Although the problem with his verse is that there were just no punchlines at all. He made only one jab at his opponent and that was it. The rest was just a weird flex to me.

Casper actually came in with the bars that were not only very creative, but really hard-hitting. I also felt that his wordplay was far superior compared to his opponent's let alone every other category that I have noticed upon reviewing this battle. Good shit you two. ChristLover777 don't stop writing, your potential screams like a banshee yo.

FV

Casper you a ghost like you casper. Its like he Usain Bolt he just getting faster.<<the fuck??

Its like Im china I export. Retarded kids text more and read less. But Christ is the best ending all this distressed im not depressed.<<watcha been smoking bro??

the hell was that verse about i still dnt know, he had concepts which could have been used to set up good punchlines but i think he yet to get into grips with his own potential and understand text battling better.

Casper pretty much had a walk over like his battle with Jay here again and all he did was just keep it simple, no sweat

practicing sodomy with the lords son<<lmfaoooooooooo!!! btw hahahaha...

This will be my bar-breakdown of this battle.

Christ.

1: I think you took that line from when I battled Casper. Nevertheless, the line itself needs improvement. You need to put it out there in a creative way. Instead of just calling him Casper, find a creative way to DISS him instead. Also (for the entire battle) make sure that you use multi word rhymes instead of one word rhymes, I ain’t a fan of them personally but people on the site tend to really favour battlers who include them.

2: Don’t put out lines like this. If they don’t directly diss your opponent, don’t put it out. You can do something with this line that’s more creative, good concept though.

3. Same thing as line 2. This is the last line that isn’t filler lines.

4-15. This is all filler. Just because one word rhymes doesn’t mean it’s good.

Overall, your verse was mostly filler. Quality>Quantity is prioritized on this site. You need to work on making multi’s and punches that actually hit the opponent.

+ Creative Concepts

- No punches 

- No multi’s

- Mostly Filler.

Casper: 1. Good setup. 

Casper: 1. Not a diss, but good three word multi.

2. Damn good diss, and like the metaphors and simile’s here. However, multi doesn’t match in rhyming. For example Er Fire doesn’t have a full rhyme with Empire. This is because how you say R is different from how you say M, far different.

3. Again, a damn good diss, hit the opponent directly. However this is only 3 syllables compared to 5 in your previous multi’s. However it was a full rhyme. 

4. Even better diss that the others, but the first part doesn’t rhyme with the first part of the other. Same thing as line 2. Ex-Fl doesn’t rhyme.

5. Needs an expo. Multi is a full multi.

6. Average diss, solid multi and I like the rhyming between the first and last part of the line.

7. I like how you used his verse against him, pretty damn creative. Nice 3-word multi.

8. Needs an expo, but again nice 3 word multi.

Casper wins with a full sweep. Here is the plus and minus of both battlers.

Christ: 

+ Creative concepts

- No punches

- No multi’s

- Mostly filler.

Plus and minus for Casper

+ Creative Punchlines and Setups

+ (Mostly) Good multi’s.

+ Very good idea using the opponents verse against them.

- Some broken multis

- Needs expo