Hey bro no hate I had to reupload this for anyone to pick up bro. No call outs on recycles or easy filler. this needs to be used on someone who wont back out.

Winner did enough to take this one. Though he needs to work on basics like multis, also his execution could be better. A lot of played ideas in there, try being more out of the box. Punches had sting, but with better setups they'd be more impactful.

Loser didn't do well. Bars weren't structured well and his punches weren't set up in a way that would bring sting to them. Not enough here to take this one.

getting better jay but hexify was hard hitting well constructed drop BSA

Hex got this with ease but going forward against legit drops, you'll want to avoid using played out basics wp like wind/wins and son/sun. This shit will get you burned against legit drops. I'd advise checking out some shit from Rieper for some more guidance on how to do it. As for the battle I don't have much more else to say, Hex actually structured his verse properly and attempted punches.

Thanks for the critique and defientaly working on it because I tried to word play those two you pointed out and it wasnt even word play good looks on the fair vote and expo bro respect

@Edgeworth ^^