Frosty your rhymes seemed really basic to me. Maybe thats because I couldn’t see them, try CAPITALISING them and using multies to improve your execution. Casper execution wise your multies were clean and effective here. But, a lot of what you wrote didn’t really flow naturally. It’s a hard thing to do, but try to write lines in a natural way that you can realistically imagine saying them in a conversation or in an audio rap.

Ideas-wise I also felt Casper was ahead, both textcees could work on trying to have wordplay where they flip one obvious meaning into another at the end of the line to form a punch-line. I’d recommend looking at battlers like Rieper, Edgeworth, Shodan and Rai for examples of people that do this regularly and at a high quality.

expo; dr suess writes childrern books , portrays himself as a cat and rhymes onesyallable words. 2)geico is an insurance company whose mascott is a geacko and there motto is save 15% or more in 15 minutes or less 3)bats must hibernate for winter and do so sometimes in hollow tress, and sleepy hollow is a horror movie about a headless horseman 4)ozzy osbourne a icon in rock and roll music bit a live bats head off in concert 5)nightmare baddream also a horse of all black in sleepy hollow 6)so if the  bats and mman have no heads there is nothing left of frosty. line that didnt fit was "nothing left of frosty like the snowman in summer, or milkshake from wendys u dont like like a weirdo)

i think casper killed it here. personals to multis to wordplays to metaphors while frosty came up with a generic diss verse with rhyming slangs with efforts at punchlines here and there which were failed by the execution. Keep up frosty ur improving tho!

Casper get this, btw loved that echo line :)

Loser didn't really have anything that stood out. Basic rhymes and basic use of his concepts made his punches land with less sting. Could have have been a lot more creative, but you kinda lacked in that field. Not enough here to get my vote.

Winner's wording was problematic in some areas like the 'living within the echo' multi which made no sense to me. Sidenote: Your expo was wayyy too long, if you really have to explain everything like that then you haven't executed it properly in the bar. The ' '15 minutes or less WINNING IT WITH A GECKO ' was probably your best line imo, you used the concept well there. Mostly your punches were ok, could have set them up better. Try being more creative, using better flips/idioms/wp/nameplay, shit like that. You took this for having slightly more impact to your punches.

I really liek the Dr. Suess line from Casper, and Frosty, you've imporved a lot! You've filled the whole box with good goodness, but your rhymes could use just a little more complexity.

Sure frosty the bat in this bring in a w,had sketch,and bold stream some raps close win,gb

I see what your inentions were frosty but I feel you couldve still had punches that stung you could do a simple style but if you follow the fundamentals of a battle verse you still couldve hurt more than what I seen.

Casper- You came in hard on this and felt like you read your oppenent well you exceeded a little more in multies and word play then punches but overall good man.

Fair vote no hate GBs

Frosty u was ok u didn't punch and go at his throat like u was supposed to I know u got more 

Casper that gecko line was nice and u was consistently at good shit

Gb 

One was more complex in every category.  Fairs in

Casper was just more complex with his rhyming and his punch concepts, though he could do to up his creativity overall. Felt both had some small wording issues but wasn’t enough for me to swing it either way and so I’m goin with Casper

^^^ Overall as in for battles going forward, even though it was enough here.

Fair Vote