Expos - 

1. Mooning also means fiddling or fooling around aimlessly

2. moon is the reason for the solar eclipse when the sun cnt shine

3. Deport also mean conducting onesel in a certain manne

4. most of his past verses were like rants with no fixed subject

nice battling you Jay, all the best ! :)

Punish Shit motherfuckers !!!

PUNISH shit

Bump for votes.

great with expos. awesome nick very creative. ppunches solid . maybe some extra wordplay. jay i see improv,ent all the time lately keep it up. gb

thanks for the appreciation and the vote casper.

Nickel got this easily as Jay was barely making any sense and just generally rambling. No real solid rhyming or semblance of a punch. Nickle atleast has structure. Nick be careful with broken Multis like your first 2 didn’t line up syllable wise. And son/sun shit ain’t gonna get it done against good competition.

JayDiamondScarFace:1 still riding goodyear tires - this actually rhyme two syllables / 2 translation wire couldve rhymed it more and do set it up before the punch / 2.5 mike tyson line - kind of basic / 3.5 squeeze python - gave half a point cus it was sloppily put together / 4.5 donuts - funny punch / the rest just seems like rambling so i give no points /

nickleshanandan :0.5 cool heat - ok bar / 0.5 wacks street? - i don't know what that means / 0.5 homeless resigned bums? / 2.5 moon eclipse shine son - very good bar / 3.0 smoke like blunts - basic / 3.5 vein/vain rhyme blood - feels reachy / 5.5 vibe rants die man - good homonym or wordplay /

overal there's some concepts they were both going for, that on some they could've made it more intricate or clearer. edging it to nickleshanandan