Felt Baron got this one simply by making more sense here. Felt Jay really was just rambling with a lot of his bars and they lacked any real direction.

Jay this verse started off like a battle verse but then very quickly became a cypher, which meant it just couldn't win the battle.

Red Baron your verse was really dope here, more than enough to take home the W. One thing I will say though, although you had complex and mostly clean multis alongside a nice flow and solid wordplay, your first scheme (the first three multis) were a bit iffy imo. The "doesn't function bitch" portion of the multis definitely carried throughout all three, but "Charles Darwin/Dunk this donut/Full on" doesn't really rhyme as far as I can see. In future make sure you capitalise only the right bits or it can just be a bit confusing; still a great read though.

Great on punclines 

And it was main criteria

Jay, I don't even want to talk about your verse. Nothing capped,bolded,quoted,italics. No rhymes, no wordplay, no metaphors, no punchlines. Fucking gibberish. I'm starting to think your just giving away free wins to everybody. Also, respond to the 8 I sent you.

Red, yours got better the longer it went on. At the beginning the punches hit light at best, and the multis (while lengthy) were forced, and also I think you got the purpose of only capping some letters mixed up. You only don't cap (in a word) the things that don't rhyme, but you only do that at the beginning or end of a word. The disses and multis picked up at "kiss on a Christmas list". Solid verse, but rocky start kept it from an 8.

Red won with a full sweep against Jay's trash heap of a verse.

Dm me with any questions.