Short- I would seruosyly loook at other battles for future refernce like I have said before. You could've filled the box better and you need work on multis and creativity.

Casper-Everything flowed perfect and in order to multis and punchlines the only thing for me is the lack of creativity.

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Short temper: Not much to vote on here since you cut it short. Next time use the whole box to get more content across to your opponent and to get your points across better. After you fill the box you could focus on using multiple syllable rhymes aka double rhymes https://double-rhyme.com/ instead of just end rhymes (mine/time/line/fine). Decent first attempt though.

CasperTheOne: Decent use of multi's here but the set-up's could've been more animated/creative. Enough to take this because you filled the box and I'm guessing that's the reason you didn't put much thought into it but I've seen you drop better. Mid-5 from me.