Jay Diamond my feedback for you here is the same as basically every other verse you've dropped recently. It's a cypher. You can't win without attacking your opponent. If you're unsure of how to do this then message myself or someone else who is winning a lot of battles or who is well-established.

Red Baron you had some nice metaphors and some solid concepts executed reasonably well through mostly clean multis. One thing to watch though, the first two syllables of each multi through your first scheme were "wishing/fist to/letsbeef", which shows that obviously the third multi in the set didn't fully fit. Try to make the multi stay entirely matching the whole way. For instance, you could have written "this shit is my metropolis" which would have matched much more cleanly.

Jay didn't attack his opponent so couldn't win; Red Baron had a solid verse with nice concepts, hard punches and (mostly) clean multis.

Winner had more hits here. I liked the opener and closer, both were witty punches. Your ideas/concepts were a bit played though, try being more creative with what you bring. Wording was cleaner than Jay's, but choppy at points [brown nosed shit eating bad smelling, for example] You had more impact in your verse which is why you get my vote. 

Jay, same here again. Punches aren't developed properly and your wording is bad. Unnatural and not easy to follow what your going for. Not enough impactful punches for you to take this one.

Dope battle winner had bars but not by far well read battle no hate