Jay Diamond this verse was another cypher. You need to attack your opponent if you want to have a chance at winning.

Orochi this was overall quite a good verse, your golf bars were really solid and you had a bunch of other nice concepts executed reasonably well. The first three multis were a bit off to me on the final syllable. I gave you the benefit of the doubt that it was down to some accent I'm not familiar with, but "calm/fall/golf" surely can't have anything more than assonance or slanting in common at best. Try to have cleaner rhymes, especially in the last syllable of a multi because that's often the most important.

Winner had slanted rhyming but was better at executing his concepts here. Punches hit, but could've been more impactful with cleaner wording and better flips in your setups. Nothing really stood out for me.

Loser had no sense of direction. No punches were being set up. You drop too many battles, when it's better to actually put some thought into what you write. This one felt rushed imo.

Kush and barz

Fuck it I'm going with best flow no hate loser was fire too