Jay the first four lines of the text box here are what you should try and do every time you battle. You flowed, rhymed multis, and most importantly you attacked your opponent and directly threatened to shoot him. It's also a good coincidence (assuming this was an open battle) that TYR is repping Texas because that made that Houston punch quite hard-hitting. However, the second half of your verse veered off topic and stopped punching and attacking, which hurt you dearly.

TYR you came packing multis, a nice flow and some basic wordplay. Just try to have more wordplay mixed in with the personals, Jay Diamond had some metaphors and if he'd attacked you for the whole verse it would have been close so you need to make sure your verses stand out through punchlines and wordplay. Good battle!

Good verze bruh,did well wrighting a verze,good luck

One dude had that murderous flow that hard to define. Salute to both but my winner went off here a little better then his opponent. Fairs in