Time not tune 

No offense, Jay, but you either need to learn better English, get a ghost, or stick to cyphers. Your battle just aren't that great, bro. 

Jay- I give you props for continuing to better yourself and not giving up on battling. I see that youre forming puns though these puns I have read are there they dont hit and come off as fillers, along with those puns I would continue to work on your word play upon what the punch is like I said its there but they dont hit nor the creativity or cleaverness isnt there. Keep at it man.

TYR-Your punches were more clear and hit, though some could have been more creativy and complex they still are good and more likely to sting. The klondike bar couldve been another wordplay upon the original concept of the hard and gay flight pun. I'd love to see more multis, with in that I mean I see the double multis you have dont get me wrong, but you couldve done a higher count or done more with it.

Both no h8 no vote due to crew memeber just here to critque respectfully. GB GL both of you.

Thx for the honest feedback Hex, ur comment is noted bro, workin' on more multis is where I'm strugglin'the most and will be sure to work harder at formin' those...Respect man

very close mafuckas