Hexify had better multis and filled the box which won them the battle here.

TwoTone your verse had some decent bars but you need to work on two things. Firstly, don't use line breaks; fill up the whole box. Secondly, try to have multi-syllabic rhymes at least one per line and CAPITALISE them so they're easy to read.

HeXiFy although some of your ideas were really neat others seemed a little played to me. Generally you had quite a good set of concepts though, although they were held back by poor execution. Try to make sure your multis match up perfectly on a syllable-for-syllable basis with one another, your rhyming really let you down here and might have cost you the win against a verse that filled the box.

enjoyed this .llove seeing new talent keep coming. two have to work on format and punchline creativity and bigger vocab. hex well put together and delivery was nice. work on your wordplay and metaphore. but great work

Cool. Thanks for the feedback.

Fill the box up, capitalize words that rhyme

Both got some talent but still got some work, but I can see that both could make that development and elevate their styles, GL to both

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Twotone had some good race and some combos his verse just better hexify verse was fallen towards the ending so he couldn't"t keep it together almost,gb

lopsided, my loser, needs touse the whole box next time and you'd still lose, you got pop knotted, but you had good shit just not good enough and not enough, gb

One filled the box here and had more punchlines then his opponent. Fairs in

Hex clearly won. As for the loser, he'll get better. We all do as artists.