Odious get,had advanced,metaphors,multies,punchlines,thee lb advanced and had a better verse,better raps

i think superman had too much vuger words n didnt fully fill da box, try doing like ur opponent. odius did so much better he had wordplay punches n nice multis which had for a better read. fairs in.

Superman for your first time this was not bad you had one punch in there or two, though this didnt hit hard for me. As I was told fro some of the best you have to come 100% everytime and dont slack. Making your disses connect with the next line to keep it flowing and not all off topic all together. ALl you need is practice and work because I do see potential.

Odious- You killed it in this one for me Metas Multies and punchlines were one point and I laughed abit I dont really have any critisms because you in the aspect of battles are doing it better then me. GBs 

fv is in.

...odious took this fair and square with more complexity, the other needs to elevate. fv, no hate!

nice battles guys id like to give some advice but im only learning this shit myself keep trying and keep going BSA