I honestly don't think I would vote on this battle even if I was able to.

Props to Sweetlips for structuring her verse in propper rap battle format. 

Both had some multis and flow at some parts, but then the multis start to break up and it wasn't as flowable.

Sweet had good multis flowing in the beginning but it got broken up and the flow messed up. There were some punches but they could've been more impactful if they had been multisyllabic.

Cooldude had a good buildup in the beginning with his personal angle but it kinda fizzled out. I don't know what "dax nah nah nah" means. Just like what I said before, a lot of these punches could've been more impactful if they were multisyllabic. And I need more impactful punches than this.

Overal there's room for improvement but it was still a nice bout.

Dax is a rapper. 

COOL-DUDE had  throrrow written some lil punz made made his verse better

The winner was clear hear cool dude just took it

Sweetlips you shuld focus lees on getting a good story down and more of dissing it was good at first, but then i kinda got a littel chill about youre last part 

EXPO; mothergoose made nursery rhymes for children. HUMPTY DUMPTY is one and refers to him boosting him up on the wall just to fall.Eminem ended ja rules career after talking abouit his daughter. Paula abdul sang hit and run and is a musiscian. AAARON is aron hernandez pro football player shot and killed other people even when making million in nfl. then hung himself in jail after conviction. big lerch ate the the body  of a woman on pcp

Sweetlips you had better concepts this time but they were not executed that well, but ur on the right track, stick to the kinda rhyme scheme you had in the beginning of your verse, it helps aa verse seem better. Next time ensure ur punches actly land.

Cooldude, i like your style few more metaphors and stuff and you really could fire up this place, still got work to do tho bro, either way you get this battle imo plus ur disses were more personal and str8 up and also landed.

I can see this is kind of a history battle from readon cool dudes verse. Though I felt Sweet Lips was more creative harder with the punches. THough both made me laugh I feel Sweet hit harder.

Winner was slightly more complex. Had more hits and had the better execution. Felt there were more impact behind the punches with the better ideas that were less played than what the loser had.

Loser didnt really set up his punches too well. Less hits and his execution was okay, but I wasn't really feeling his punches. Less creative and had a more basic verse imo.

The 1st one was structured a lil better