not bad sweet lips... but i belive jay got this one!!

Jay came thru with the cypher off the top off the dome free flow, kinda hard to read, don't where the bars and setups are but maybe that's his thing. I liked the "savior jesus facial features" line. Verse could've used more battle-esque bars to go at his opponent with punchlines.

Sweet had some multis going on, but I need more punches.

Jay youre getting better Just gotta attack more be more agressive with your punchlines pu some weight behind them. Sweetlips wins cuz she had more connections between her rhymes. 

I feal like my winner just whent whit beter bars in total the hole story about the loser trying to get fame and being gay relly got me nice work 

loser you gatta youse more words ro rythmer then you will get out a lot better 

SL got this one with better rhymes, though SL had no multis SL actually used words that rhyme, Jay ya can't use 'facial features'  2x in the beginning or 'brief' like ya did on the last line and expect that to be a rhyme...

No H8, FV in

{Gz}

Sweetlips's rhymes were more coherent the hottest thing abt the battle was the sweetlips profile pic tho.

Jay you already know what i think of your verses, this one was no different.

Deleted Naegii's un-expo'd vote.

lol @ being fucked in the anus & it being painless

Shock factor edged it for me nothing personal