Solid verse from Casper with decent wordplay and multis was enough to take the win here. Jplourde this wasn't bad at all, and your internal/external rhyming was nice. However, there are two things you need to work on rhyming-wise. Firstly, a lot of your rhymes are just the same word. You maintained the same rhyme throughout, which is cool and all, but not when it involves rhyming clean three times (including two in a row) and scene twice. If you are going to use the same rhyme scheme through multiple bars you have to keep switching it up and keep it fresh. Secondly, try to have multi-syllable rhymes, and CAPITALISE them, like Casper did here. This will go a long way towards boosting your success. Good battle!

Can't wait see what you bring to the the table

J-Id work on capping rhymes and utlizing with " or anything to help the punch or to it also within workiing on capping rhymes I would also recomend creativity

Casper- I just reccomend creativity you have everything in most battles I just see no creativity

Second entry verze caspertheone"s verze was unpredictable impressed he a vision rapper gb

this was close coz of two reasons, casper was not at his best and even tho JPlourde had potential he was not consitent and really went low towards the end.

the difference maker was majorly - execution,multis, vocab and higher disses and lower self hype, all of which casper's verse reflected and thus gets my fair vote too.

casper got this one he had hard hitting punchlines multis creative wordplay it was incredible BSA