wow casper ur really improving, jay nice ideas. fv

jay need more ammo at the opposition

Jay: What the fuck are you doing man. You didn’t have a single multi, you didn’t have anything that rhymed with the exception of the third last and last lines, and your punchlines are non existent. It wasn’t a glorified self hype verse, which goes in the cyphers category.

Casper: Had a plethora of multi word rhymes, not the greatest, but you still had them. However you used one rhyme twice, which is basically cheating. Your metaphors and wordplay were astounding, to the point where I would say it tops Bnas and Rieper. Punchlines also hit fucking hard as hell, due to the aforementioned things. You are obviously some new talent, and I’m glad I didn’t have to face off against you when you have a verse like that.

Overall, Casper gets a clean sweep with Jay dishing out something out of hell’s kitchen.

Fair vote, dm me if you have a question.

Jay's lines didn't really lead up to a punch. Execution wasn't the best and the wording was unnatural. Your ideas were too simple imo, so there was litle impact to what you had. 

Casper's ideas weren't too complex, but he did have the better execution. A lot easier to follow what he was goin for. The 'Stark Eulogy' line was probably your best line. You did have some poor wording like the great/grate wp, which didn't work both ways. I would say work on being more creative, you got the basics down.

I thought one had the more harder bars here 

That's an aiigh verse bruh,was kinda basic though

fv

Jay did not have much in his while casper's verse fire honestly, those david, grate and diamond lines were amazing stuff!! 

Fairs in.

This is kinda boring yoooo.....

Casper's was obviously better and more organized.

Jay picked up a bit about half way through, but the first half was weak. You can't rhyme the same word a shit ton of times. Diss your oponent, don't just talk about yourself.

Casper had some hefty punches and decent wordplay, though got a bit choppy in the center. Dug the David and Goliath bar and the Diamond in the rough line. Good shit son.