Both emcees really need to fill up the whole box when they write. Especially if you're going to do a sixteen-bar battle, it is absolutely crucial to use the whole amount of space at your disposal. ImN0t0wen had a really, really small verse with some basic hits. Wrick It Ralph's verse had some high points, nice rhymes, good hits, but was still at a reasonably basic level and was held back by using line breaks. Just write on and fill up each line, the site will count your bars. Also try to CAPITALISE your multi syllable rhymes, because I often only realised they were multis instead of single rhymes after a while looking at them.

fair vote

Both of you should work on vocab and multis. Wrick took this one cleanly, however you also need to work on formatting your raps in a way that really make it hit home. Check others battles to figure this out. But wrick did have more metaphors and punches. All love tho gb. 

Wrick it had better vocab and filled the space 

Owen need to fill the space and work on format 

Both could use some work, I would suggest both take a peek and some battle and bring more the next time them battle, but Wrick filled more of the box, had a lil bit of a flow and had more rhyming here so he got me vote...GL both...

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ralph just had a bit more and edged ot, im not owen wasnt enough, i was gonna reapond to owen but my internet got cut off. i suggest both peep game on other battles to get inspired. fair vote.

Second verse made a little more sense dense deep raps through verse so he's the w,here fvgb

Imnotowen had rhymes, no punchlines just a few set ups, and too many self hype lines and zero multis. You need to word on your creativity bro.

Ralph had multis few decent punchlines but the metaphors and wordplays were played out concepts, better complexity and vocab in totality a much better verse in this battle all around with huge potential to go doper in the near future. 

Fair vote guys

Bros before hoes :)