BilbulGonji you've got some potential, but since it was your first time here you were really held back by not doing things like filling up the whole box or rhyming more, which meant Bnas was able to steal a win he didn't entirely deserve.

Bnas the middle of your verse was actually quite solid on the flow/multi front, although it strayed quite off-topic for a bit. But as Gonji said, you did have some contradictions, but moreso, "heard before" and "bore the nerd" do not rhyme. There were other problems like that at the end of your verse. If Gonji's verse had filled the box you would have been in some danger.

haha that some good shit. how do i reply?

btw, how can you call someone a faggot then comment on his girl?? contradiction bozo!! trololol

#1 of all time in Lb took this pretty easily lol welcome back Bnas , Gonji not a bad drop but you got a lot to Learn  here .

If I need to explain why BNAS get 8 from me then i am sorry but the admin is dumb!!!

IMA BATTLE UNTIL I D I E 

Bnas just need some format and further your skills u already presented here. Same Bible. Since all criteria scored rating speaks it all. Fv

I don't understand how someone can write up a verse that's so horrible and actually expect to win.

Bnas has that battle for actually bringing a battle verse to the table. His opponent wrote up a very poor cypher verse that couldn't have taken any more than 300 seconds to create. Unlike his opponent, Bnas actually incorporated punchlines into his verse. The victor of this battle is axiomatic. 

Fv

Band had a better verse,with more words

my loser needs to utilize the space better, my winner is a killer so no surprises here, gb