Cooldude's verse had some nice ideas and a lot of rhyming, but as Casper said he needs to work on capitalising rhymes more, and also work on more multi-syllabic schemes like Capser had here. Casper, your verse was solid with nice multis and consistent punches.

Good rhyme scheme 

thanks. ur improving already. just got to jab more. and capitalise your rhymes so others can read flow better. 

One took this with Multies nothing really special in this battle. 

good stuff guys, but there was a clear winner here, my loser just got out skilled, plain and simple, but i liked it just too cool dude, get ruthless and fueled, giv'em your dark side and you'll get some wins. the structure is there. and to the winner me like the cold blooded killer approach, gb