Jay Diamond again what you've written here is a cypher. It's actually a good cypher, and I quite like it, but this is the battle section. It doesn't belong here and I won't give any verse that isn't a battle verse more than a 4.

Bnas your verse here was decent, and punched your opponent consistently throughout a full box, which meant it was enough to win. Most of your multis were clean (but disappointingly basic), however the "judge this book/dodgin hooks/starvin crook" ones didn't really match with all 3 syllables, and a lot of your ideas seemed a bit weird or didn't really make a lot of sense (like the last bar). Overall though, you did enough to win by having an attacking verse replete with multis and punches.

better battle than most

one edged it a bit, fair vote

B took it base on advanced rating I call it on those . B definitely threw some punches could use some more creativity to make them hit harder but very direct non metaphorically. Jay you've used a bot more multi syllable words them usual but you both have to use more of them thruought. Fv win bnas