COOLDUDE that wasn't bad for a first drop. You filled the box, had some decent rhymes and attacked a bit. However, your verse was more like a cypher in that you didn't spend most of it actually attacking your opponent. Try to spend most of your verse dissing them, like casper did here. Casper you had a decent verse overall, some nice attempts at wordplay-based punches, try to work on improving this skill. My biggest feedback to you based on this would be to try for more complicated multis, because 2 syllables doesn't really cut it. Good battle!

cooldude i like ur flow but casper got the multis down. even though s just 2 words he has potential. u have potential too cool if u peek other battles. both were entertainii gotta give the w to casper. fair vote.

Losers bars was basic.. in nature, only rhyming umma do this umma do tha.. casper was working with scheme and word play.. fairs in..no hate.. good battle though but losers got long way to go. 

Cool dude posted a cypher sorta flex verse full of self praises and zero disses let alone metaphors or wordplays and casper posted a battle verse with better creative disses in the first part of it.

Cool dude if that was your first verse you got promise. 

Casper gets this easy.

This battle rap was close the first guy COOL DUDE had some good thoughts twoo. Mention meat and beefs so Ima give him a vote

This is a no brainer for me...Not that the loser was necessarily bad, even thou he had some decent bars in there he didnt really attack his opp, winner had good flow, multis and punches...All the things a battle needs...GB yall

No H8, FV in

Yup