YD had a decent verse full of attacks and punches and some decent rhyming, just try to capitalise your rhymes and have them as multis like RG did here. RG's verse was solid and in overall quality punched a lot, the general quality of the writing was probably a 5. That being said, the way it really clearly and effectively responded to the first verse on several specific bars combined with some nice multis took it to a 6 level for me, and it was just a level above YD's in rhyming, concepts and execution.

rhyme scheme and  punches hit harder. yung alot of creativity and skill. keep grinding

disclaimer-i mentioned a rapper, i was big fan of him but ya that was too soon i shouldnt have wrote that, i was gonna rebuttle the read/ dictionary line to rhymes e/ see but theres not enough spacd so ill give YD props for that

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GL dude, those are fresh bars yo

Close combat.. rhyme.. I am impressed with that rebuttal.. if you hadnt done that I wouldve voted yung for a win.. 

RG I love the bars and the attacks you made on my rapper name. That's what I expected from a person who's ranked #2718 All time.

thanks, YungDark...u have very nice verse yourself, keep at it

good battle