This was a hard decision to make. A really nice, slick flow from sweetlips with a high quantity of low quality rhyming against one of the best verses I've seen from Jay Diamond. In the end I gave it to Jay because he had a personal and because his verse actually attacked more, whereas Sweetlips had more of a cypher. Good battle!

for real I wasn't feeling either of you'd homies in this you gotta Cap your multies and bracket your Wordplay to punch with the algorithms that fold symmetrical if you can work it out in your own brain but be careful because you become very dislexic from it

Yeahyeah thanks effort and practise,4da fv y'all

I felt like you made a very good attempt at incorporating multiple syllable rhymes into your verse while at the same time maintaing a consistency of jabs towards your opponent, however, I feel like none of the lines really go with each other to form punches and your multi's could have been structured a bit better but this for sure shows potential. 

@Jay you need to find someone to help you spell check bud. 

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My kindle got spell check bruh it's not large spell check

I think the feminist had more bars, but some of them didn't make sense, like " just don't go cruising while ur abusing/ don't ' be who he gets accused for someone's drooling". What does that even mean? The rhyme schemes were decent in the beginning. (Battle me Sweetlips)

Jay got bars but it was all over the place.. sweet lips kept punching lyn after lyn towards him so for that.. I have got the winner.

Was this a battle or a cypher?

Sweetlips - ur verse had decent vocab and multi and rhymes and thats it, these elementary manadte of a verse gotta work on wordplays and metaphors too man for some serious scripts in the future, thats where the cteativity is at.

Jay- you made an effort at metaphors and wordplays none of them were effectives but coz ur were the only ones in this battle ypu get this one easy.

nice verses y'all! I'm slightly in favor of sweetlips for steady stream of multis while maintaining their coherence. Jay had them bars though, don't get me wrong.

Yup