Exos - (all wordplays in quotes)

1. messy is the star defender of barcelona FC 2.Essays=Mexicans and beat it is a song from michael jackson who was also the king of pop also known to molest kids and he is only 15 lol 3. iron maiden pioneered heavy metal shredding = heavy metal guitar skill, also a personal since his name is heavy metal hero rest is simple 4. GOAT = greatest of all time and beef is only obtained from cows or bulls also he wanted to battle me coz he was bored as per his msg in the chat also used as a personal.

nice battling you bro! orr to the marijuana smoking now :p

Expo: The Green Mile is a novel by Stephen King about a man on death row. Harry Styles is one of the members of OneDirection. Niles Crane is the younger, often overshadowed brother of Frasier Crane from the television shows Frasier and Cheers. Nick is indian, therefore, the customer support line.

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both creative. heavy i thought had a little better wordplay and metaphores. but very gb from nick. tough call

Appreciate the vote casper this battle's been starving for em

HeavyMetalHero: Good use of vocabulary here but you don't need to CAP words that don't rhyme, for example: DOUBLE KNOTTED & EMINEM in your first line, GREEN & HARRY 2nd line, etc. You had some decent ideas (Killshot & Green Mile) but you didn't fully go in-depth, just threw them around like jabs but nothing hit that hard. Last part of your verse was your weakest, they just weren't good insults directly aimed at your opponent. Overall this was a decent verse, end rhymes were there and concepts weren't half bad, just work on working with multiple syllables in your rhymes and you'll be on the right path.

Nickleshanandan: I'm giving you the same advice about CAPPING words that don't rhyme, MOMMA & SOCCER, etc. Good use of wordplay here with the Messi/Messy & Iron Maiden/Iron Made And but the Essay one just didn't work both ways, not sure what "essays at winning this" had to do with mexican porn. Heavy Metal through Heavy Pencil were good lines but you repeated the rhyme. Last line wasn't that great, it's just bragging so it doesn't hurt your opponent. Overall you had some good ideas here, especially for your second battle, just work on incorporating multiple syllable rhymes with your concepts and you'll be on a great path.

Overall my winner took more chances with concepts & wordplay and was able to take this pretty convincely, both could work on multi's and set-ups but decent battle here, fair's in folks.

Thanks for the vote student, the essay denotes the fact that mexicans use the term "ese" instead of nigga or dude hence i used it essay and the mexican porn bit, ese fucked like mexican porn. 

Heavy had some really basic rhymes, some that didnt make much sense but he still rhymes while attacking his opp, while Nickles did attack his opp but he did so with out rhyming, I would suggest ya both read up on some vets battles, both could use work but wouldn't count them out yet...GL both

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Good battle heavymetal you on any other rap battle platforms other than letsbeef? Lemme know.