McNefarious your verse was absolutely dope I really liked the slick flow as well as the internal/external rhyme scheme combinations and multis. There was just one problem – it wasn't a battle verse. You didn't diss or call out your opponent at all; if you look at RhymeGladiator's verse he had a number of punchlines which flip a double meaning to attack you in each bar. That is the kind of verse you should be aiming to write in a battle; the verse you wrote belongs in the cypher section. RhymeGladiator had a pretty solid verse, a couple of the multis weren't perfectly clean and there were a number of instances where it looked like wordplay but didn't make sense to me; however overall it punched your opponent well which was enough to win you the battle.

typo-"Bangalore" expo- a bangalore is a explosive charge most notably used in dday invasion of ww2 by US forces, the opponent is from Bangalore, India...a nice wordplay right there yeah...

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it came to format and quality of all criteria. both incoporated whats needed one just did a bit better. good job rhyme gb

Damn, Nefarious, great verse

16 line text battle,first verse was basic and second verse rhymegladiator his first was a victory rap verse,fv y'all

Thanks for the feedback guys. I've been writing lyrics for a while, but this was my first battle rap here, so I'm not quite used to it yet. 

And thanks for participating RhymeGladiator. Great verse there.