Both had really bad wording and piss poor ideas. Need to freshen it up a bit. Also both had some broken up syllable counts with their rhyming. Really big deal on this site to make sure they match up.  That said offa whats presented, i have a winner. His opener was botb. Fairs in

 . Bobby the multi rhymes didnt make makes sense, for example "flock to surround be" u have to write raps that you would hear in a normal conversation. Dont try to be poetic just use sentences that are accepted in standard writing/english no offense. same advice to

Naegl on that aspect as well, your first sentences didnt have a multi cap rhyme/punchlin, the standard would to be "setup sentence" than punchline and than repeat, thats what i do. The rhymes have to be have the same sylables and almost sound like they rhyme. Doctor is Good needs to rhyme w/ someing for example. 

u both have potential, just need tto fix technical errors, but you have potential for amazing creativity n flow, but i vote my vote for the one who slightly edged it. fair vote no h8 keep improvimg.

Naegii, I get what you were doing at the beginning in setting up the Dr Who? line but it needed to be cleaned up and shortened. Make sure you have a rhyme scheme so it flows well when you read it aloud. Also, be sure to stay consistant with your formatting.

Bobby this is one of the better rounds I’ve seen from you. Much more readable than usual, good formatting. Your rhyming is much better than usual too. I like what I’m seeing, keep it up and work on getting a bit more towards your opponent and writing a bit less like a cypher. 

Naegii has some nice stuff. Pinocchio/long nose has been done to death but I like a creative reach and that stethoscope bar is right up my street. Rather see an original reach than an unoriginal basic bar. Also tying stethoscope with the Doctor scheme is a nice idea and pretty well executed. Could’ve been a bit cleaner and a bit more consistent with your syllable rhyming but this is a good performance and a good clash. 

i felt nae punches were harder and the multies were well thought. the delivery also came across more at then about himself. bobby definetly some creativity and just a few tweeks could really set it up to be a hard hittin verse

Neither one had great wordplay but I gotta say Naehii had more insults