Loser seems new and was a lot more cypherish. Since you didn't really direct punches towards Squammy your punches kinda fell flat. You should read more battles to see how others structure their bars and find your own style. The rhymes you used were basic, try rhyming more syllables, to have more to work with in your bars. Also try directing shit towards your opponents to add more sting to your punches. Make sure your setups are creative so the punch has more impact. 

Winner's opener was my fav in this battle. Good flip on the concept and the punch was nice. The first setup [“hold back these punches”] could've been reworded to relate more to the concept. Felt this verse was a bit up and down, some punches that I preferred over others. Overall your execution was good and you used your ideas well to write some nice punches. I'd say some lines like the gymnastics one were kinda played out, so focus on bringing fresher concepts to the table.

She left it open no blind drop and the reaction could have been more . Lady rappers are hard to come by actually going for it and it seems she's new on here and squamous has been for a while. I think it was a fun battle but my vote is for sweet

Caspertheone: “may I please have a crumb of pussy?”

Sqwammy , my man.. why dont you start spittin in king of the dot.. you got fire after fire on every battle.. I want you to school me on how to write this kindaa shit.. or maybe it cant be taught.. u have to have it.. any way you dope man.. an lips, girl you got some skills too.. keep on grinding..

Idk how one guy got so much in his box. That said.. Felt the opponent took this with a more aggressive style. Landing hit after hit. Felt he was a bit more creative with his lines and multis for the execution. Fairs in

obviously squammy did wp, punchess, n the standard, sweetlips got potential if shes reads up on other battles n utilizes the standard. fv

Auto-win goes to Squammy, Sweetlips voted for itself as caspertheone.

One was generic, one had punches. One felt like a battle rap, one felt like a freestyle or cypher. No h8

Hella close battle here yall. I felt squammy edged this one with his punch lines.  "wont hold back punches just cos your a girl im clashin so watch me leave lips swollen like allergic reactions" that shit was straight fire. Then the line about gymnastics and stretching with the bars just put him over the top. Both did there thing, but I got squammy taking this one good battle yall fairs in. 

On my moma for a chick u did better den I expected u had flow but it wasn't like battle material not taking nothing from u 

Squammy I've been seeing yo battles lately and I gotta say dat u been on top of ya shit mad salute

Gb 

i was unawarethat if you voted fairly and unbais that you could not vote for someone you know that may uuse ur device to access their account. it was not me just blindly voting my vote is simple. she is fairly new rapping at all and her first battle here she went for it without a blind drop. so not bad is the score. squammy had acess and ammunition and i feel fell way shport of his capabilities. still not bad. so basically even. sorry it wont happen again all but she is real and not me on 2 accounts and i will only comment on hers in future

Pretty fair to say squammy got this opener was flame lips was OK funny if anything fairs in

This battle is weak Witt a girl birch and the emcee equally kicked shitt he had hard bars and that's my vote dawg