Loser didn't set his punches up well. Rambling and having all that filler doesn't add anything to your punch. Gotta make sure that everything relates to the concept, here you didn't really direct attacks and also your wording was quite unnatural and didn't make sense at points. 

Winner's wording was choppy but he did have the better ideas. His execution was okay but could've been a lot better. Most of your shit was super awkward but overall you did have the more impactful verse.

Jay man. Your killing me with your style lol. Too much hood. That shit is for freestyles audio side. That aside, some nice rhyming, but no solid hits due to lack of oomph in the metaphor dept. Also you wanted to be rated on w/p, but didn't use it any. A generous rating of 4 for the verse as a whole.

Oro... Pretty solid verse. Some instances of forced wording, but in general a decent attempt. You smashed your opponent here but should pick up some more creative nd outta the box setups when facing bigger fish. 

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