SQUAMMY

Jay definitely aight but my winner had that delivery and expression like he was out here wanting to murder somebody. This sites getting so much more active both text and audio 

Props to Jay for making jabs at his opponent so I'm giving him like two extra points for not only doing that but for also not typing like a complete idiot although you went full retard at the end. Also, you failed to incorporate any sort of wordplay let alone metaphorical content....

Squammy actually gets this for handling this more like a rap battles. What he did as his opener was really cool. At first I thoguht he was on some racist shit but then he was referring to the blackening thing as day and night. The way he set that up was prefect and made total sense. He used some really catchy metaphors that went along with his punches like the ones he used in the beginning which had me all fucked up.

Squammy | Metaphors: 7 | Wordplay: 8Jay | Metaphors: 1 

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Sometimes I hate how Lets Beef battle comments format themselves.Squammy you get an 8 on wordplay and 7 on metaphors. Jay you get straight 1's homie with a three as your overal score. Step up your game dude fr

I think squammy based on criteria, including flow, multis and good connection 

Jay this was better than most of your shit. But still the punches aren't landing with sting. You gotta use more complex rhyming and use your concepts to create better flips for your punches. But you was more direct here and the 'slam your shit on the ocean like a rasta shark' had me rolling, lol.

Winner had simple ideas but he executed his shit really well. Cleaner wording and good execution. Opener was nice but like I said the ideas are played out so keep that in mind, make sure what you put out is as creative as possible so there's more sting behind your punches. 

BSA all day