nice

Bobby, you weren't directing any punches towards your opponent. More a cypher verse than a battle one. You have to attack your opponent, using your ideas and concepts in creative/complex ways to make your punches land with more sting. You were too basic in this battle, you should try rhyming more than 1 syallable and at least 4 to have more to work with in your bars.

Orochi, broken multi in your first bar which took sting off the punchline. Your multis were the problem in this verse, some were broken, others were slants, and some just didn't make sense at all. Your wording was okay, used your concepts well.

Overall, I felt Orochi had the better punches though they could've been executed better. Bobby didn't direct punches towards Orochi so his verse was lacking any impact.

I felt this one was pretty close, but Bobby' s punches hit a little harder imo. Both had good word play and the creativity was there for both bars. But I gotta go with Bobby on this one with the stronger punchlines. Good battle fairs in. 

voting for orochi for havbing more complex and using capped multi rhyminga. fair vote.

16 lines from both y'all ill read later

I think the t verse went hard with some 2legit lines raps was good enough twoo get the vote here this battle rap.gb

one has alot crammed in his verse. However, nothing really jabbed at his opponent. Other guy was more direct and got more hits in. Fairs in

Orochi got this one.. I loved bobbys concept too..