Multies from Zezmer were capitalised properly so I could identify them and see he was doing a really solid amount of rhyming, that's why I gave him the win. The capitalised sections in TrueWords' verse didn't seem to rhyme at all and the multies they did use weren't particularly long, well-matching or clear, so I had a really hard job finding them and wasn't impressed when I did find them. My advice for TrueWords would be to actually capitalise the syllables that rhyme in their multi sections; no more, no less. Zezmer I liked your verse but several of the rhymes seemed like a real stretch, you really went for quantity over quality here which did hold you back and prevent you from having particularly good setups to your punches or particularly cohesiven bars. Keep improving though, both of you clearly have some promising talent and just need to work on using it in more effective ways. Good luck!

This was a nice lil spar here glad I read it both guys had the fisticuffs going issues on both sides like syllables matching, slanting, wording, structure, but with time those will improve as far as the winner could go either way pretty even as far as flow's concerned but the punches I give it to TrueWords he has the higher punch count with better builds & ideas Zezmer although I feel you had bar of the battle with that blow emissions like you broke a piston line that was it the rest was just light jabs but still a solid effort fairs in RESPECT 

first verse was kinda hard,goes hard I'm vote ing first rapper good battle,gb

I gotta go with True words here, I felt his bars had a little more depth. and that bar like DONALD Trumps neck was sick. Good battle though both brought it. Fairs in. 

Both came wit dat heat gotta go wit true words dat starburst line was nice 

both hit hard but the second verse stood out for me as winner fv

Zezmer made not one attempt at creating a punchline but rather through huge amount of jabs at him using above average vocabulary with mediocre wordplay. 

Truewords had some grammatical problems here like... my guy it's *you're as in "you are" not your.... but I felt that unlike his opponent, True actually tried to throw some punchlines here and honestly they weren't even half bad. True obviously has a ton of potential here he just needs to work on structing his verses better.

I gotta give this one to True. Both of you guys keep writing though. Fv