Bar Breakdown: 1: I said cypher because his rap wasn't a battle rap, it was a cypher. 2: It isn't hard to decipher because the cypher button is one click to the right of the cypher button. 3: The Pied Piper mislead villagers into thinking he could get rid of rats for free, and his rap is misleading because it is in the wrong section. 4: the ankle biter line implies she is sucking my dick. The penis is above the ankles, and she is a "step above" an ankle biter. 5: Chinese people are infamous for being bad drivers. No racial offense meant (I am literally half Chinese). 6: The Sahara is dry. 7: satire means making a parody of something, and in this case he is so had that people thought he was a parody of rap. 8: The Philadelphia Flyers are a hockey team that fucking sucks. 9: People burn dead bodies on funeral pyers. Expo: I left out lines that were extremely easy to understand. I added a lot to this list as their are a lot of new boomers here

also Bobby, next time post something like this in the cyphers section, where more serious content is posted 

mad battle player but so old and generic you dont get that you gotta evolve by doing something new nothing you wrote effected me beyond appreciating your punchlines from the 90s 

homie i only just found out what cypher is cause you told me i been on this site for one day i thought rap battles were supposed to be creative not distructive

plus its a bit condescending when you in point form describe your meanings cmon they are so obvious i certainly didnt need help getting in i know how to rap battle its all sucking each others dicks and fucking your own mom gay shit and using weapons sounds primitve and one dimentional bro

Bobby didn't execute his punches properly. Really more of a cypher verse than anything. Gotta direct attacks towards your opponent. Read some battles to see how others peeps structure their shit. 

Wolfchainz, you were more aggressive and directed shit towards Bobby but you have room for improvement. Multis have to rhyme syllable wise, and only the rhyming bits should be capped. Some good ideas in there but you didn't execute them well, could've been more creative with them concepts.

Overall, Wolfchainz gets this one for being more direct and having slightly more impact behind his punches. Bobby needs to improve his structure and set his punches up in a better way.

Bobby, rap battles are supposed to hurt your opponent, not just all structure and rhyming. That’s why those things are secondary, punchlines are the most important thing. Making your opponent feel like shit is the objective. The creativity comes in the background to the rhyme, the entire thing doesn’t have to be about an entirely “creative concept.”. I put expos in case people don’t understand the vocabulary or jokes I’m using. I don’t want to lose a battle because people don’t understand what I’m saying.

WOLFCHAINZ I think the second verse oz good enoughff for a win in this battle,was a little butta with some wordz good battle,gb...

Gb

Unexplained vote removed 

i got a different flavour yo

Bobby literally had no idea what he was doing in this battle at all. I don't think he understands this this was a *battle* and not just a cypher where you can write about what the fuck ever. 

Wolfchainz easily gets my vote for not only bringing an actual battle verse to the table but for executing some pretty solid punches at his opponent as well.

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*that this was