Black got the spirit but lacked any decent punches , semion is far superior with his multis so black just cap n use multis n youll get there, semion im always impressed by ya bars. fair vote

Mlb your punches weren't really hard. You didn't set em up creatively enough. You've gotta work on the basics like multis and how to structure your bars properly. Read some battles, e.g. your opponent's to see good examples of how to write a solid bar. You got potential cos i saw some lines that you directed towards your opponent but you have a lot to work on.

Semion your opener was BOTB, fiyyah shit. I liked how you kept to the scheme and dropped some nice lines like the one about the pregnant girl. Your execution was really good and wording was clean. Nothing too choppy in there. I didn't fell your closer was that hard tbh since it could've been executed slightly better in a more relevant and creative way.

Overall Semion has this one for me with the better punches and for excelling in every category. Loser has to work on using his ideas more effecitvely and work on making his punches land with more sting by using clever flips and creative setups.

look im a be fair you only just won it but your style is outdated and too generic sorry but its now said at least i voted