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Only expo... Jay Garrick is the Flash

Diamond - first things first I wanna say you need to look into formatting, capitalising your rhymes etc just because i struggle a bit to find your flow otherwise, It'd straight away make you twice as good cos to me I'm struggling to find your rhymes, schemes, punches, its a mess to look at. Pop em like a bag of chips is an interesting one but then you say dorito chips straight after so idk whats going on man. Until you fix that formatting I really can't drop much wisdom for you.

Kilo - i mean you kinda win regardless since i understand what yours says lol, but some feedback lets see. Nice multis to start, bounty scheme is good shit, makes sense and pays off well. I know they're different rhyme schemes but 'earn to die' followed by 'devotion to die' reads a bit messy, but then you bring it back with your closer which I think is real sweet.

Win to Kilo, go fix your formatting Diamond cos i wanna know what youre actually capable of. 

Jay - You need to do some homework on the basics. Structure would be a good start, then you'll have some understanding on how to set up a punch. Most of your work here is poorly worded & hard to follow. Read up on some other battles & stay at it, you'll be alright. / Kilo - You got this w an overall better verse. Your low point would be that a few of the multis weren't the strongest but you did what you needed to here. Realistic Ratings in.

One was robotic to the core . I didn't feel the ideas or word play . Some lines were possibly the silliest shits hes ever said... Winner had some smoothly worded verse . A few decent punches . And fair ender line

Jay didn't have any multis or wordplay, or punchlines for that matter. Lil Kilo had all multi's, but a lot of them were broken syllable wise (two lines) and had one broken rhyme. Garrick line was nice, but not many other hard hitting punchlines. Everything other than that was fantastic on Kilo's side.

Kilo wins with a clean sweep in all categories.

Dm me if you have any questions.

Ones sided battle , Homing device stood out the most for me.

I think kilos punches were a little more followed thru  and just a little more meat to the filler words then Jay. Jay it was a nice way to stay on one plot and the delivery was nice. Kilo just pulled the w but that's my opinion . Both nice

Liked Jay's home alone bit but Kilo killed it EZ. Liked everything but his final bars which seemed lazy to me. Didn't need them though

One need to step the game up considerably other was way too much constantly elevating his game with a well thought out structured verse plus it wasn't too wordy with alot of "ya's" or "the's" which makes it more creative & fun to read plus it's harder to do FLASH/GARRICK 🔥🔥🔥🔥RESPECT fairs in