patrickz your verse was really, really, really short. If you have a look at other battles on the site they always fill up their boxes, don't bother separating out lines the thing will count them for you. Also try capitalising your rhymes like bnas did here, and having strings of syllables (called multies) which Bnas demonstrated the best in their opening two lines.

Bnas this verse was obviously an adequate one to win the battle. However you can clearly do better, this is a lazy verse where you didn't even fill the box and your final multi pair is only two syllables. You hold the title of #1 text battler of all time, and its disappointing to see the apparent GOAT dropping verses like this. No hate, good luck to both, I know you both have the capacity to do so much better in your coming battles and I'm sure you will.

MvH we here on LB FOREVER

Patrickz didnt have any multi word rhymes, o even multi syllable rhymes, so he gets an automatic 1. His punchlines were extremely basic, with an evident lack of creavity. The last line disses himself without any reason, and he already used the word bitch as a single word rhyme prior in his “rap”. He didn’t have a single instance of wordplay. Bnas doesn’t have any broken multi’s, but gone doesn’t rhyme with dome (gone is pronounced gah-n, not go-n). Bnas also had some simplistic punches, albeit better than patrickz’s. Bnas also doesn’t have any wordplay. I also want to point out both users have spelling mistakes. Patrickz spelled “off” wrong, and bnas spelt “syllable” and “bastard wrong”.

Bnas takes the win for having multi syllable rhymes and more creative punchlines.

Fair vote, Dm me for any questions.

Also patrickz, since I’m assuming you’re new, I’ll lay out for you a few things you should know.

1. Always fill out the box. Even if you have to switch schemes (rhyming words), always fill out the box.

2. Always capitalize rhymes and multi’s, this makes it easier for people to tell your rhymes and multi’s.

3. Don’t stick with the simplistic insults. Rap battling isn’t about insulting your opponent flat out, it’s about finding creative ways to do it. You should always have creative concepts, instead of the “fuck your girl”, “you suck”, “I’m a gangsta” shit. Do those, but in inventive ways. Metaphors are one of the best ways to inventively strike you’re opponent. (X=Variable) Ex: Even if you were a X you couldn’t X / Your just like X with the way that you X / I could call you X with the way that you X. 

4. Don’t use expletives just for the sake of “looking cool” because you’re swearing. Of course you should have some expletives but don’t make every line explicit.

5. Use a vast array of words to make your rap better. If you just use basic words, your rap becomes bland.

6. The multi’s are some of the most important parts of rap. Multi’s are a group of words that rhyme with another group of words. Take T.N.B’s “Hypnotize” for example: “Tits and Bras, Ménage-e-Tois, sex in expensive cars”, Tits and bras is a group of multi’s, the next being ménage-e-tois and after that being expensive cars.

Mr Bnas you are truly a faggit. Lol. With that said you clearly took this one by filling the box more and being more direct. First 2 lines were the best imo, after that you kinda started ranting. Closer was basic but it hit.

Patrickz you didn't fill the box completely and that basically gave you less space to work with, don't press enter after every line. Also you didn't direct any attacks towards your opponent, the verse was more suited to being in a cypher. Also say it you're a bitch is not the route to take haha. Read some battles and see how everyone structures their shit and work from there.

obviously bnas was a superior verse, patrickz need to use multis n cap his rhymes. fv.

Sorry guys thx for the advice. Good battle Bnas

Salute famo

for number one of all time i was dissapointed

I felt bnas took this with deeper wordplay and his punches hit harder. This was pretty clear cut to me good battle fair vote in