MF - I think wording is where you can improve the most, otherwise you pretty much got it down. Just keep pushing yourself to think of fresh new concepts. / Gun - Post that shit in the cypher section. You got to have punchlines in there, go at the opponent otherwise it doesn't work in a battle. Realistic Ratings in.

 Dope drop Mind Fuck. My favourite lines were the 'chromosome missing' line and the closer. Your wording could've been a lot better but overall your execution was quite good. Some ideas you had would've landed harder if you reworded them slightly like the O Zone one.

Gunsalut only the multi rhymes should be capped. Also I couldn't follow what you were going for. You gotta set your punches up creatively and make sure the wording is clean. You didn't direct many lines towards Mind Fuck which really brought you down. 

Overall Mind Fuck gets this one for bringing the better and more creative punches while staying consistent throughout. Gunsalut needs to read more battles and set up his punches in a better way so they land with more impact.

I have to give this one to mind thought his verse was more thought out and more smoother punches the fair.is tossed fellas

Weak battle overall but huge props to Gunsalut for one of the best first battles I’ve seen. Mind Fuck had good multi’s with three breaks, and Gunsalut also had some good multi’s but with 5+ line breaks. Gunsalut has the clear better punchlines here, as mind fuck had a verse that was mostly just self hype. Below average vocab from both, solid metaphors but a lack of wordplay from both.

Close battle but Gunsalut takes the clear W in this one. Gunsalut has better punchlines, Mind Fuck’d had better multi’s, everything else was even. However I believe punchlines are the most important thing, and Gunsalut had better punchlines. Good job both of you.

Fair vote, dm me if you have any questions.

mind fuck won but i didnt really like either

Gb